The only effective way to deal with unempolyment is to introduce rapid urbanisation. How far you agree ?
Unemployment is one of the major problem faced by most of the nations. Students get educated from various cities and due to lack of oppotunities they start moving towards nearby cities, town. Yet the cities are facing unemployment as the graduates percentage is increased. Though there are vairous ways to overcome this problem, urbanisation is considered as one of the best solution.
Compaing to villages or non-developed area, urbanisation needs to be developed because different garduates are looking for a job that fits their education. The government and entreprenurs should considered jobless candidates and also the wellfare of the society. In an article, a recent survey results showed that only 40 percent of the graduates are getting placed in proper companies while 40 percent are still seeking job and other choose higher education. Making a city developed and offering job to the seekers plays an essential role in enhancing the life of an individual and the nation as well.
I would consider an entreprenur who was jobless initially and later started family business in his village which was no way related to his education. Later, on working hard he developed his industry and now he is capable of offering job for over 500 people. Thus the village was upgraded and many young men and women has got new life. The government can take action against unemployment and create job offers for jobless people in their native. Developing facilities like public transport, encouraging native industries are the major places where a city needs development.
To put it in a nutshell, the change can begin from a individual perspective in improving their city, native to next level. To improve this, one needs to be employed which is the foundation in everyone's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'graduates'' or 'graduate's'?
Suggestion: graduates'; graduate's
...e cities are facing unemployment as the graduates percentage is increased. Though there a...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...le of offering job for over 500 people. Thus the village was upgraded and many young...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n a nutshell, the change can begin from a individual perspective in improving the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13103448276 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84550462163 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7993224862 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0220330312979 0.242375264174 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0066917738673 0.0925447433944 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0138082587295 0.071462118173 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0122817133889 0.151781067708 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00746704439668 0.0609392437508 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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