Parent should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
These days, it has become a growing trend to see parent should be held legally
responsible for their childrend’s acts. As such, there are both merits and
demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the
latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous
one is that children are not matual people and they are taken care of by their
parents. Not only can parents live in the same place with their children, but
parents can also spend most time with their children. Needless to say, all these
upsides stand parents in good stead when it comes to holding legally
responsible to their children’s acts.
Another pivotal aspect of parent should be held legally resonsible to their
children’acts is that perents are persons have the most influence to children.
The primary one stem from the fact that they are family, which is children can
not find from other people. Last but not least, parents always give all their best
to their children unconditionally. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour
of parent should be holding legally responsible to their children’s acts.
In view of the argument outline above, one can conclude that the benefit of
parent should be holding legally responsible to their children’s acts are too
great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rmer outdo the latter. There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Line 8, column 23, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...care of by their parents. Not only can parents live in the same place with their child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09777777778 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83644709077 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537777777778 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1559659596 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 7.25397266985 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548416867454 0.242375264174 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220481092094 0.0925447433944 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163080423533 0.071462118173 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198518616683 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178782503325 0.0609392437508 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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