Parents are held responsible for their children’s acts, what is your opinion?
though such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the heated debate whether the parents are responsible for their children’s behavior or not can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. In my view, I argue that the children's behavior shall not be accounted by their children because of existence of other external aspects that may affect the children's behavior, and I will put my forth in this essay.
To commence with, children are negatively affected by the behavior of their peers in the schools, which in most of the cases will negatively affect the behavior children. Moreover, it is vital to note that children in the schools are encouraging each other to be rowdy boys for presenting domination. For instance, a study shows that about 65% of children bad behavior are copied from their peers from school. Thus, it is crucial to note that the parents should not fully responsible for their children behavior.
In the same context, most children nowadays are taking the sport team members and actors as solid example to follow. It is important to note that most of the sport team members and actors are having bad habits just like smoking, which is followed by children. Therefore, it is pivotal to observe what children watch.
In conclusion, I see equally potential evidence that support my arguments i have provided above. In my point of view, I believe that there are many aspects that may affect on the children behavior, which are the behavior of other children in the school and the bad habits of the sport team members and actors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Though
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76539462056 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1819652837 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251964167938 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112597069413 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808164409813 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150945811243 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801885621077 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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