PARENTS SHOULD BE HELD LEGALLY RESPONSIBLE FOR THEIR CHILDREN’S ACT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?
The substantial influence of parents being held responsible for their children’s act has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion parents should be responsible to guide their children and not for their children’s actions. this essay will elaborate how parents are legally responsible for their children’s act but on the same time they are unaware of what child performs when they are away from parent’s observation
At the outset, there are numerous reasons of how parents can be held responsible for child’s behavior and teach their children to indulge into legal activities but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that parents are the first mentors to their children and they learn every single thing from what their parents say and do. .Also, they are incapable of deciding whether it’s good or bad for them.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of parents being legally responsible for their children’s act but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that children are curious and jovial in nature, so therefore they like to explore every single thing around them. hence out of curiosity, it does happen that they tend to indulge into inappropriate activities which parents are totally unaware of .
To recapitulate, children tend to make mistakes in their tender age and parents cannot be made responsible for every actions but parents should set good examples in front of children to make them decisive and hence they involve themselves in legal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, nevertheless, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91489170817 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.934951882 50.4703680194 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.142857143 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.9669160288 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.577484123442 0.242375264174 238% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296367293358 0.0925447433944 320% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171188620139 0.071462118173 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38446040663 0.151781067708 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148885960565 0.0609392437508 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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