In this day and age, this phenomenon that the legal responsibility for children's activities is the task for their parents has become a controversial debate among the public in around the world. the children learn many things from their parents such as goodness and badness. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this viewpoint. At first, the society could affect to children negatively, But the parents are their main influential pattern. They influence their children directly which could be the constructive effects. For example, if a father is an athlete such as soccer player, his son may become soccer player too.
In addition, the parents' tutorials can effect to social activities of children. they can make a criminal or a gentleman by their behaves in the family. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers has shown that a significant number of people such as thief, professor, and driver grew in a family with similar jobs.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about this statement, I profoundly believe that parents should be accountable for their children's behavior because they prepare them to join the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.205 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7642313579 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0374998578 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296318537993 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104261513118 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630402218867 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173284104568 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736467952703 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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