Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples
Parents play vital role in child growth as they are the one who remain always with him or her during childhood. These days there are debates between the people who think that parents should be held responsible but other think that parents should not be held responsible. In this essay, I shall be analyzing both side of the aspect and will be providing my viewpoint.
Children are like sponge who absorb quickly during childhood. Moreover, child use to interact with parents and learn many things as parents are the first person to interact since birth. For instance, child learn mother tongue and culture without putting any effort of learning since parents keep on interacting with child. So it is very important for the parents to guide child with value of life and culture since it will help him or her during life span.
On the other hand, there are people who believe that parents should not be held responsible for wrong doing by child. In this world, every child behave in a different way since the behavior of each child is different. However, parents should monitor their child on daily basis so that they are aware of what he or she is doing and its parents responsibility if child does anything wrong. For instance, the great actor, Jackie Chan felt apologize since his son was involved in drugs.
In conclusion, parents should keep track for their child so that they can change the behavior during adolescent age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'remain'.
Suggestion: always remain
...in child growth as they are the one who remain always with him or her during childhood. These...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ickly during childhood. Moreover, child use to interact with parents and learn many...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to mother'
Suggestion: to mother
... since birth. For instance, child learn mother tongue and culture without putting any ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hild. In this world, every child behave in a different way since the behavior of each child is dif...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g. For instance, the great actor, Jackie Chan felt apologize since his son was in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81376518219 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30505567112 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1310178747 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269201524989 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107386664398 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754074728588 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17219200941 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368210226585 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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