Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
In recent years, there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend that, it is the importance of parents to look after their children’s development, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. In this essay, I will elaborate both the beneficial and dissenting facets of the parents’ responsibilities over children’s act.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons over the accountability of their children at every intervention of the parents, their dominant and jurisdiction over the children will be always boost up in their future thrive. For example, in India with teacher’s mentor, parents further monitored in every aspect of their child’s life, not only they just intervention only in studies but they involve in extra curriculum activities which will outdo in their future. Clearly, it is imperative and preponderant in every facets of the parent responsibilities towards children's.
Moreover, another pivotal aspects goes in a way that, children’s in adolescence age are young and do not know about the good and bad, the parents are one for their dominant and control, if the parent instill their children to be independent then by doing so without any control over them can lead to violence. For instance, in countries like china and japan, many families let their kids be independent with no any control on them causing them to involve in criminal activities. Apparently, parents are legally responsible for such negative acts for which children’s’ bewildered.
To recapitulate from the above aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having a positive facet, but the upside of negative aspects shall be accentuated carefully to avert the children from illegal act which parents are responsible for them and are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43416370107 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33561131704 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.141127577 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.666666667 104.977214359 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.9669160288 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336711614418 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155256291133 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589291270125 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207184348539 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603174068697 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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