Parents should be held legally responsible for there children's acts. What is your opinion? support it with a personal example.
Kids follow the footsteps of their parent, hence it is always a duty of the parent to treat their kid wisely and nurture them with good manners. I personally feel parents are the sole proprietor for every action of their child. Let’s discuss about this in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, all kids are born as a clean slate, parents equip them with good characters and well manners. I've many examples to prove this theory. Master Lenin who won the International sensation award last month is one such example. He is just 7 and achieved this award with 4 yrs of continuous practice. This was achievable only because of his parent’s guidance and his tedious training. When you show a kid the right path, he follows it to achieve his goals.
Similarly when you don't train your kid and discipline him in the right moment, it can result in disastrous situation. Pollachi rape case is one such instance. If Thirunavakarasu's parents would have been little strict with him for his actions, this blunder would not have occurred.
The analysis establishes that, parents should take good disciplinary actions and teach their kids good manners. This will help them to grow as a gentle man and help the neighbourhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70710184787 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6296872637 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8571428571 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13032924034 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416191840072 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397142685073 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795652941752 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255128867182 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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