Parents should be legally held responsible for children act?
The discussion on parents responsible for their children activities is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts majority of views from people and remains a hot topic among people of concerns. In this essay, i will scrutinize my view of point by providing some relevant examples and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of arguments in the favour of my instance. The most preponderant one lies stems in the fact that children gain lot of activities like language and behaviour and so on. Moreover, children spend much time with their parents so children are try to copy them. The most important example i can quote here is in the United legal many parents are punishing for bad activities of their children.
On the flip side, those who are disagree with these ideas they believe that school education play important role in children activities because now days every child go to school for taking education so obviously education will play significant role in children activities.
To concluded, after taking the above stated points into consideration, l am inclined to believe that parents play vital role in their child activities but the important of school education cannot be denied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1327014218 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70227807166 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.666877104 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205682291895 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834038677348 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778371182968 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112025762116 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469805834103 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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