Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don't need. Give your opinion about this practice.
The implication of componies use advertisements to influence people to buy things, which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I partially agree with this statement and this will further discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are diverse reaasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that with the help of advertisements we can take knowledge about new inventions. For example, in the United states people are prefer to see advertisements to gain information related to new things.
Nevertheless. some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that componies use advertisements to attract people can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are more facts in the favour of that, but the most predominant one stems from the fact that people are atemted buy to those things which they does not need and this reason lead to wastage of money. As an illutration, in the india induvisuals are waste lot of money buy to unimportant things.
The importance of componies use advertisements attrect to people can be debated, but the fact remains that there were sevearl factors that lead to this theme and matter. Eventually, accoirding to above analysis, it can be concluded that advertisements are well sourse foir gain knowledge about new inventions but there are some disadvantage related to money. It can be predicted that in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16602316602 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94826012123 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1171207306 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255312706119 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944006013125 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640943710654 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153108673717 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524937308025 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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