Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous & unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options & give examples.
The discussion on keeping pets good for children or dangerous is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divides in their opinions. The subject attracts majority of views from people and remains a hot topic among people of concerns. In this essay I will scrutinize my point of view by providing some relevant example and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of arguments in the side of my instances. The most preponderant one lies stems from the fact children can play with pets in leisure time like dog, cat and so on. Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this trend is that some intelligent pets like dog can look after our home when we are go to out of station. The most impeccable example I can quote here is that in the United States there natives keep dog in their home for play and protection.
On the flip side, there are some arguments of people, but the most crucial is that some people keep pets like pit-bull dog, tigers and lion which are more dangerous. As an illustration, a survey shows that in the India there 20% killed children due to the pit-bull dog.
To conclude, after taking the above stated points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that keep pets have some advantage but the negative impact of keep pet undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...dog can look after our home when we are go to out of station. The most impeccable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72925764192 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52622257523 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5438656915 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.3 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196254768797 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779418530698 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632474479163 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117567328946 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291073205646 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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