Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinions and give examples.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinions and give examples.

The implication of keeping pets is good for children while other think it is dangerous and unhealthy, which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that it is good and dangerous also for the children’s. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.

At the outset, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that keeping pets at home is good because pets like dogs doing protection from the thief’s and burglars. Another benefit is when peoples get bore in home then pets help peoples to remove their stress like playing with them. Moreover dogs have been proven to be very loyal because they help us in various difficult situations and do not leave us alone.

Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and trend to believe that keeping pets at home is good or dangerous can be addressed with some positive facts as wall as there are innumerable facts in favour of that, but the most pre dominant one stems from the fact that there are some pets which is not harmful for the children’s or peoples but there are so many species of dogs like American pit-bull and so on.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to the conclusion that the problem of keeping pets at home is good but at a limit but some pets is not good for keeping at home.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ve their stress like playing with them. Moreover dogs have been proven to be very loyal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82954545455 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64210179694 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.478363287 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341297383796 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137584210471 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138154426651 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210201624728 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893900172515 0.0609392437508 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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