In the past 100 years, there are many inventions like antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
The role of computers with the advent of the internet is widely debated with many people claiming that it is the most pivotal invention by mankind in the past 100 years and has served humanity to its best. Perhaps, I also believe that computers have become an indispensable part of our daily lives and have drastically changed the way we live and we think. This essay will further elaborate how computers have revolutionized our lives and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are many reasons why computers are the biggest invention of mankind. The most conspicuous one is that computers and internet have made the communication effective, easier and instant around the globe. Moreover, this has made people interact and stay in contact with their long-lost friends and relatives in a more convenient way. In this way, computers and internet have completely replaced the conventional forms of interaction like telephone and telegram with a new technological form of Skype, Zoom, and Facebook to a large extent.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that computers and internet offer a vast reservoir of knowledge for the people of all age groups and eventually, provide a learning environment for them. In addition, schools and teachers nowadays conduct visual presentations with the help of this advancement to enhance their understanding and thus, enlighten their lives. Hence, there is no doubt that computers and internet outdo the primary form of education like books and notebooks.
In views of the arguments outlined above, the impact of computers in our life is prominent and undoubtedly, have augmented the skills of people which has made them stand out and cope in this modern world.
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| 2018-03-05 | meenutalwar | 85 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15901060071 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84968694838 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2643163236 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.727272727 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115496069988 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481760538022 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696277653051 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620727732516 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462026444745 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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