In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology
Recently, the technology and new inventions and its corresponding impact on human’s life have been marked by controversy among critics particularly, those who concern about life. While some of them claim that, new inventions such as medicine inventions, airplanes and computers are highly detrimental, I am inclined to believe that new technologies are beneficial, and I will analyse this throughout this essay.
To begin with, from the citizen’s standpoint, technology and invention can provide society with some noticeable effects which may have roots in the fact that they really have facilitated many works such as arriving in your destination by airplanes in just half an hour, or other plastic surgeries that were impossible. Research findings confirm that, the invention of computers was the greatest success in the last century. Therefore, now, with the emerge of technology, people in every country can stay connected together which were just a dream many years ago. As it clearly shows, technology was the greatest invention of human in this century.
Moreover, as a salient example, a significant research undertaken by a prestigious university asserted that medicine and science have a tremendous impact on people’s life. Consequently, medicine inspires a totally new area of science and cultivate human’s mind with its diverse aspects. As it is obvious, medicine and science and technology have a significant effect on citizen’s life in the last 100 years.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that, whereas there are numerous compelling arguments on both sides, the benefits of the invention of technology far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the last century. Therefore, now, with the emerge of technology, people in every country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55813953488 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15767560231 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9988059595 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244428980023 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982621373716 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629372348468 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127846342072 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370431532192 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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