Children should only play sports for fun not in competitions or contest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our modern societies, doing sport seems to be a basic requirement for children. The issue that children should do sport for fun or competition has long been marked by controversy among people. While many parents and families claim that children should not get involved in any competition, I am firmly convinced that participating children in sports contest can be advantageous for both children and the society.
To begin with, participating in a sports competition with a defined goal can encourage children to put all their effort on that. For example, when we define a gift as a goal for a sports competition, children would not make fun of the contest and consequently, we cultivate youngsters' mind to overcome to that game. In addition, in a sports contest children have the opportunity to learn teamwork to attain a goal which in turn results in having more socialized young people. As it clearly reveals, taking part in a sports contest is more beneficial for school children.
Moreover, with stage a sports competition among children, they could be ranked in that sport. Therefore, sport talented could be recognized and they could be cultivated for professional sport. Statistics reveal that most of the sports stars were recognized by school sports contest. Since this firmly shows, sports competition have the benefit of identifying the possible sport talented at an early age.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that, participating in a sport for competition rather than for fun is advantageous as it can encourage youngsters for doing professional sport and also can bring about sports talent identification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: mind overcoming
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21132075472 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04306341686 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.172638088 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365745914481 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167148572269 0.0925447433944 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639385603888 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253604444378 0.151781067708 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583464822858 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.