People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
To begin with, Hard work is closely knitted with many tiny things such as, continues learning, proper planning, dedication, time-management and mainly consistancy. Success is always associated with these qualities but not merely a luck. For example, Edison's great invention of light came through several hard works, setbacks, failures and consistant effort throughout his discovery. He proudly said that, he had learned 10,000 different ways of not doing it' after his final great invention after several failed attempts.
On the other hand, Luck only plays a small role in any journey towards success. We heard only a very few achievers with only luck as a soul factor. Luck will not help one in gaining learning, character building and experience as hard-work does with a person through his journey towards success. We are getting paid by our employer only for our work not for luck. Anything that comes without hard-work will not sustain for a long.
To conclude, Hard-work is the main factor which contributes to success. Hence the consistent effort really plays a key role and a salt of person's success with a little or no luck in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 189.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0582010582 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62562905635 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9108821778 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225987157061 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994201653304 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697945176836 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168931641875 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568338476438 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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