Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree or disagree/
Surely there has no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals personal development has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it affects profession growths. I partially agree with notion and elaborate in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad merits of personal development. The first and foremost, it enhance the career of employees because they develop their skills by doing any kind of business. Also, it helps to improve the talents and potential so due to this, worker have chance to achieve their goals. Probing further, People get aware of different ways to deal with clients. Workers learn plenty of things in their daily life which make them professional employees.
On the contrary, every rose has its own thorn so there are some pitfalls of it. Firstly, hardworking have major role in personal development. As a case in point, some individuals do not have proper experience or skills with which they have to face immense troubles regarding their business. Some can experience financial loss.
To conclude, I firmly believe that it depends on person’s skills and hardworking because it is key of success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...development. The first and foremost, it enhance the career of employees because they de...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...bles regarding their business. Some can experience financial loss. To conclude, I firmly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17289719626 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77595659479 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8780517785 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128270866818 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043669458847 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464667673921 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699211034349 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206722146664 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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