Positive and negative effects of the information revolution through mass media

Nowadays, there are different types of mass media such as newspaper, radio and social media that are easily available. People are divided on the positive and negative benefits of technology information through mass media. In this essay, significant points of its positive effects will be emphasized.

One of the most popular forms of mass media today is social media. It can be easily accessed through our mobile phones and laptops with the use of internet. Information distribution particularly news and latest updates on current issues can easily spread across millions of users using this online platform. Because of its capability, one of its significant use is when government agencies issue warnings especially when a natural calamity may happen such as volcanic eruption. Clearly, using social media in spreading information strengthens the position that the positive effect that it contributes to society is highly unparalleled.

On the other hand, social media can also be used in spreading fake news. It is one of the prevalent issues that is occurring nowadays as most users tend to quickly believe the information that is fed to them and people with bad intentions use it on their own advantage. This negative effect of information distribution through social media has cause widespread confusion to people.

In my opinion, I fully agree that the positive benefit of technology information through mass media outweigh its negative effect. We just have to carefully secure and be more vigilant on the information that we get from different mass media platforms.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (5 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.344 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1961613983 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450959756688 0.242375264174 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190356998498 0.0925447433944 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16395770964 0.071462118173 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333592586668 0.151781067708 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11242993292 0.0609392437508 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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