Pros and Cons of extreme or adventure sports?
The role of extreme sports has always been a controversial topic to debate. Many people believe that these events play an important role to create awareness about the potential danger. On the other hand, others argue that adventures games pose extreme life-threatening and many young people are getting influenced. In my opinion, benefits associated with these extreme sports overweighs disadvantages. This essay would further discuss both merits and demerits with justifying reasons.
To commence with, conducting these type of events attract many visitors around the world which not only contribute to the country economy but also increases the reputation of the hosting nation. The main advantage of these events are, it will provide mass employment opportunities to local citizens through different business sectors. It also helps athletes who are interested to participate in these type of games. For example, mountain biking championship conducted in New Zealand attract tourists from different countries which create an influx of international currency for the economy. This example clearly exemplifies us there are numerous benefits associated with these sports.
On the flip side, there are few disadvantages associated with these games. Sports such as bungee jump has become so popular in recent years and hundreds of people lost their lives during participation. Moreover, participating in extreme sports are dangerous for health and many people to show off and want to become a celebrity by doing these activities and losing their valuable life. For example, car racing is the best example, driving a car to beat other participants involves high risks to win the race.
According to the arguments aforementioned, it can be concluded that the advantages of these sports events overweight disadvantages and further the government should promote these events by providing annual budget and infrastructure requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63356164384 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98196831237 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5818066992 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124849390678 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470285361229 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664031330141 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809827038911 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709175831397 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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