PTE essay It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice To what extent do you agree or disagree

Marriage is one of the most important decision which should be taken after effective forethought and considerations. As, starting a whole new family, comes with lots of responsibilities and one should be able to cope up with it if there is proper future planning in place. So, idea of getting married before finishing study and settling down seems pretty impulsive and should be avoided.

Reason being, without studies completion, it is quite difficult to get decent and sustainable jobs in the market. As after marriage, there will be drastic increase in the responsibilities including money requirements and without proper job prospects, it makes the idea of settling down quite ineffective. Moreover, in order to fund daily amenities and needs that comes with managing family, prominent job is the ultimate requirement, which will not be fulfilled if you are not able to complete all the study necessities.

Also, idea of marriage before even settling down seems pretty unsustainable. Since, without proper home and living conditions, thinking of introducing new family member is irrational. Even the other person will not feel comfortable with the whole new uncertain future aspects this arrangement is going to being for both of their lives. Also, since there is no effective job management, there will always be uncertainty regarding the future, which will eventually lead to sacrifices and stress-induced environment. Later, when planning of family expansion comes into consideration, then situation will become even more complicated due to the fact that uncertainty of job, money, home and other basic amenities are of prime concern.

Hence, it can be concluded that the idea of getting married before completing education and settling down is quite irrational, impulsive and unsustainable.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06940132433 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.985139551 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105360086184 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461571849619 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537633647726 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801437152849 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033548500587 0.0609392437508 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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