In recent years some websites have appeared which allow students to grade their teachers Some people believe that this is a good idea while others think that these websites give power to the wrong people Choose which position you most agree with and discu

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In recent years some websites have appeared which allow students to grade their teachers. Some people believe that this is a good idea, while others think that these websites give power to the wrong people.

Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Write between 200 and 300 words.

Recently, students have been provided with the opportunities to assess their teachers through using some online websites. Some people think that assessing teachers online is a great idea, while others argue that assessing teachers online could be used improperly by some students. This essay will discuss the reasons why assessment of teachers should not be done online using these websites.

Assessment of teachers should not be done online because some students may provide incorrect information. Some students may have bad relationships with their teachers due to many reasons, such as their marks in the exams, or long homework's, so they use these websites to affect on their teachers. Recent research, which was conducted in Jordan, has found that 77% of teachers assessments which made online provides false information. Thus, schools have to adopt a different technique to assess their teachers rather than using online assessment.

On the other hand, some people believe that providing students chance to assess their teachers online is a great idea. Some students may feel shy or fear from their teacher, so assessing teachers online provides some protection to them since they will not provide their names. But these people are unaware the fact that shy and feard student expects to meet these teachers in the future courses, and they do not want to create problems with them. Therefore, assessment teachers online using some websites is bad idea and schools have to choose another method to assess their teachers.

In conclusion, assessment of teachers by their students online using some websites has become more popular these days. In my opinion, I believe that assessment of teachers by students online is a very bad idea and the schools have to suggest an alternative solution which could be used more effectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29692832765 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55769657814 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484641638225 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.020913576 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24653294572 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128236891787 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561714767988 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189454594152 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268740197534 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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