Should sports classes be sacrificed high school, so students can concentrate academic subjects.

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Should sports classes be sacrificed high school, so students can concentrate academic subjects.

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals sports classes has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether sport lectures should be made mandatory in the academics or not. I would say it is compulsory in high school.
To begin with, sports classes give enormous benefits of pupils. Firstly, sports provide fitness to body as well as helpful for proper growth of students. Secondly, it reduce the stress level of study among children in which they can feel relax and can do any work with energetic way. Moreover, physical activities provide better opportunities for children as well as helpful for achieving their future goals. For example, if a student is not interested in academic subjects but they are interested in sports so they can create passion into it.
In addition to it, physical activities give help to border the horizon of mind so pupils can easily solve difficult calculations. Furthermore, it release the beneficial hormone in the body which is helpful for growth of body. Sport is a source of earning which is beneficial for students.
In conclusion, sports classes should be mandatory in high school because it is helpful for students into different aspects.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09333333333 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72638321446 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3420344284 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1538461538 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.25397266985 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289849181931 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973238643756 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907926393887 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188910828878 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095957533817 0.0609392437508 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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