There is no ambiguity in stating that we are dwelling in a modern era, some schools of thought feel enthusiastic about voting, while other are making contradict views and say that people should have freedom to choose not to vote. In my opinion, voting should be mandatory for every citizen and former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention. So, this essay will dredge deeper into this notion before reaching at concrete conclusion, in the upcoming paragraphs.
Looking at the bright side of voting, to embark with, in the democratic nation it is the basic right of every person to give his vote to honest person, so that right minister can work for their development. Moreover, ministers of the nation work for people without any greed.
In addition to the above, as can be seen that, crime is going increased in every nation around the world, when people will promote voting system instead of choose minister randamly then it help to diminish the corruption in the nation.
After hashing out the aforesaid deliberation, I firmly assert that voting system offer the full feedom to everyone and masses can choose minister according to their unity. Ultimately, it will uplift the life standard of every citizen.
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- The space travel is fantastic these days and people are very fascinated towards it but there are many environmental problems on our planet that need to be resolved first. What is your opinion? Should money be spent on space travel or on environmental issu 85
- What are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to outside world including mobile phone, email and social networking? 80
- In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? 79
- As E-books are available online these days, the value of printed books has diminished. Agree or disagree? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to minister'
Suggestion: to minister
...promote voting system instead of choose minister randamly then it help to diminish the c...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ead of choose minister randamly then it help to diminish the corruption in the natio...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to minister'
Suggestion: to minister
...eedom to everyone and masses can choose minister according to their unity. Ultimately, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02926829268 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45934945911 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1189080927 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.875 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15969560816 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600929079265 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419275965097 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893035191465 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314700142192 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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