What is the negative and positive effects of tourism under developed nations? Give your opinion.
The importance of tourism under developed nations which was always debetable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial which others reject this notion. In my opinion, the former appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both negative and positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that tourism provide employment to the local people of the nation. As a ramification, it help to uplift the financial conditions of the local people. For example, it can be seen that every year many masses go to Singapore just to visit at the famous places of this nation, the local people of the Singapore earn money from hotels. Moreover, tourism increase the feeling of brotherhood among the people of different nations which is very essential in order to maintain the peaceful environment. Needless to say, these merits of tourism stand developed nations in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument, but the most crucial one is that people of the other nation visit at the particular nation then they become the reason of pollution, as can be seen that many people when visit at water bodies then they throw plastic bottles and other materials that lead to water pollution. Apart from this , almost all masses use expensive gadget like camera and smart phones when they go to your. Hence, it is ostensible from that why many people against to this notion.
After hashing out the aforementioned deliberation, one can reach a conclusion that merits of tourism are instrumental indeed. Needless to say, the potential drawbacks of this trend should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03691275168 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60561948807 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0768820294 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188328373501 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628844599625 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513159819587 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108841713622 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665540219866 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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