Effective learning requires time comforts, time and piece so it is impossible to combine study and employment. agree or disagree?
The effect of learning issue has always debatable but now these days it became controversial. The education of youth is like cornerstone of every country and education is necessary of development. So, proper time, comforts and peace is necessary for effective education, it is not possible to combine study and employment. This essay will explore how its necessary or unnecessary for students to give comfort time and peace towards study.I am partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, when people will do job and study together, then they cannot pay proper attention towards the education, due to which they have to face failure in the study. Moreover, man cannot spend proper time with their family, because of lots of burden of study and work. After that, people will have to face some health problems, like depression.
On the flip side, some people think if people will do work along with study, they can financially help of family and they can become independent for their study. Furthermore, when they will earn themselves, then they will do study as well and avoid to wastage of money. Besides this, people can increase their confidence level with help of jobs and they will get chance to meet different persons, which will also increase their experience.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is people can continue their study with along part time jobs and it is also beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96761133603 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50744927636 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2461359492 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140080842576 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648746011523 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090708887696 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964833689477 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801898660541 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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