In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer
I completely agree with the statement that the availability of guns in the household does impact positively on some countries shooting. When it comes to owning a gun different countries have a different take on it.There are some countries where the ownership of gun can be very easy process while there are others who have put some restrictions on it. If we compare these countries we will definitely observe that the shooting incidences are lesser in the other countries where the ownership of a gun is not so easy.
The countries have allowed owning a gun by an individual or household for their safety & self-defense but it is
really questionable that how sincerely the gun owners understand this. Not just that how many of them owns
a gun for their safety & not for dominating or threatening others. In a country which allows the ownership of
gun, there were more than 1000 incidents of homicides in a year while in a country which lawfully does not
allow to own a gun it was less than 20. This is a really very awakening when it comes to the dependence of
shooting upon the ownership of the gun.Owning a gun & carrying it along can even psychologically impact the person to commit a crime or misuse it. Which means that if we let a person own a gun for his/her safety will curtail the safety of others which is not acceptable at all.
To conclude, though the countries have permitted to own a gun for the safety it is very controversial to define
the purpose of owning a gun by an individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64552238806 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8124908373 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481343283582 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.382060428 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12371381173 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647519809487 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216828967367 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563673723369 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02775614069 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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