Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadgantages of this.
There are some debate regarding the position of some companies that seek advise from their employees when it is required to make decisions. Some people believe that this stamente has positive sides, whereas others believe that the negative points are the majority. This essay will discuss both sides and highlight the advantages of assuming such behaviour among the team work.
As some organizations may integrate employees on its decision making process in order to become more transparent among its team, inumerous results can be collected once the staff gets more involved as part of the team force. If the company passes through difficult times and needs cooperation, it is possible to gather the employees' opinion that reflects the actual opinion of its market. For example, It is effective and highly recomended to run surveys in order to gather people's opinion regarding improvements of goods and services.
On the other hand it is understandable to disagree with those people because it is hard to make a decision that suits everyone. The reason why it should be avoided is because of multiple people with different visions that may not come to a final decision. On this case, the decision will split apart the team and have negative consequences.
To sum up, I believe that although some companies are getting their employees to help to take a decision, both sides should be taken into account when evaluating goods and services. However, I believe that it is always beneficial to have different points of view when making decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...operation, it is possible to gather the employees opinion that reflects the actual opinio...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ne. The reason why it should be avoided is because of multiple people with different visio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12598425197 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66132413758 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2119237977 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319217459693 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980311777464 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622322332932 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12933961934 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700478032886 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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