Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In most organization, employees are encouraged to give opinions and contribution in decision making process of company’s products and services. This essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of this management strategy.
Engaging employees in the decision making process creates an open organizational structure. The structure allows for a free flow of information and utilization of the staffs experience. As employees are directly in touch with customers and other stakeholders, they are more likely to come up with an instant and practical solution to any arisen problem. An open organizational structure encourages employees to contribute their opinions and improve the overall performance of the organizations.
However, this management strategy requires higher level of managers to constantly update and be very open for discussion. The strategy also requires simple organizational structure or effective communication method so that the voice of employees can be heard and applied effectively. For instance, organization with a complex hierarchy establishes certain procedures administrative processes. As the final decision has been made, it is no longer an appropriate solution.
To conclude, although a well-organized structure is required to effectively engage employees in the decision making process, getting employees involved in such process helps to improve to the final products and services.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98039215686 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41944706404 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2784942303 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258651873896 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961503795428 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880054351989 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177893202728 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791766553467 0.0609392437508 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.9458128079 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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