Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
There is no denying that we are living in an advanced world, and the scientist and researchers have achieved numerous discoveries that could help us understand the whole universe, but the crimes are also still persistent. While some people think that outer space quest is just a waste of resources and the money should be utilized to solve the significant issues worldwide, others believe that exploring the space is as just as important. In my opinion, I will discuss why remediating all the conflicts should be taken first, rather than overspending the money to space discoveries.
On the one hand, everywhere we look, there is a crime. Violence and killings consume us negatively. The reports and news show that is a primary cause of pain in our world. For instance, drug trades and human trafficking in most third world counties causes corruption. The government should allocate an immense amount of money to tackle this issue first, instead of purchasing materials for building rockets and spaceships.
On the other hand, space researches also offer a wide range of information for all of us, but I do not think these discoveries can help resolve the crimes. Despite the milestones and successes of NASA, for instance, the killings are still chronic. Thus, it is the time for the all the governments and junctions worldwide to work together and put an end to all obstacles.
To conclude, more allocation of funds should be furnished to combat the plethora of issues in our world, instead of over allotting it to space ventures. In my opinion, this is an effective way for us humans to live in harmony.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, third, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77005896031 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1146196737 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196362736982 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562177111671 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854587527294 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110553547278 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985498914117 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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