The violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
TV is a primary source of a plethora of shows and movies for people to watch. People that are watching movies with violent narratives such as brutal scenes and killings may emotionally feel repressed, but in general, this does not turn them into outlaws and felons. I reckon that violent films are not necessary owing to chronic crimes and wrongdoings in the society.
On the one hand, movies that have crime storyline gives a high entertainment to viewers. Hence, this invalidates the idea that these viewers will add up to the numbers of atrocities. Based on my personal experience, I have already watched countless crime films, but I have never thought of breaking the law as what projected in the movie. Additionally, as per the global investigation and report, the numerous crimes in the world are due to the other factors such as drugs, and not because of violent movies exposed on TV.
On the other hand, violent movies can be unsafe for children and teenagers especially at ages 18 and below. There can be a detrimental effect on their young minds when watching films with shootings and murders. As a tangible example, scientific research undertaken by the experts shows that the kids that are under five years old are notably vulnerable to violence that they see on TV, and they may advocate this immoral act when they grow up. Hence, parents are advised to supervise their kids always.
To conclude, I profoundly believe that watching violent films on TV cannot contribute to the crimes in the community. Movies with violent scenes are just pure entertainment, and these do not make movie viewers criminals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, i reckon, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93795620438 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66631505532 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.614897758 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246920746121 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874945659012 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645621249418 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163247982443 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723760902925 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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