Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
The importance of laws change human behavior was always a debatable topic. Many people claim that laws is the only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace. It is completely agreed that human behavior is governed by legislations. The following essay would further elaborate how people usually behave in a way that is in accordance with the law.
To begin with, strict laws makes better countries and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with strict laws have minimal crime rate. For example, in Singapore smuggling drugs is a criminal offence and one has to face death penalty and therefore such activities hardly take place there. This example exemplifies that laws can alter people's behavior. Thus, there is an obvious link between laws and human behavior.
Furthermore, in the UAE, kissing in public is a punishable act. Every citizen of this country is aware of the law and its hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the country. This example clearly explains that absence of law may create an unfavorable environment for the smooth functioning of the society.
To summarise, the above analysis establishes that there is a strong correlation between law and human behavior. It has been proven that many countries use law as major tool for peace and security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tries and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with strict laws have minima...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...es and people respond to a situation in a orderly manner. Countries with strict l...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'break'.
Suggestion: break
... of the law and its hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63226025762 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1015288784 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6428571429 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338197147287 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123344364248 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788441061318 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201380973218 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999644851775 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.