Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about effects of law on human behavior. While some progressively adore the ideology that law change human behavior, others undoubtedly despise it. This essay will prudently persuade with both sides and will conclude that law changes human behavior.
Laws in a society are made for betterment of its member if they are followed in their true sense. There must be also some punishments if someone not follows these rules and regulations in order to make sure that everyone follows. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic research on the crime rate in Lahore city, which revealed that there was 50% decrease in theft cases when strict punishment in theft law was included. So one can argue that compelling people to follow law changes their behaviors.
People who argue that law does not change the human behavior give reason that it is internal motivation which forces someone to change his behavior. This may be true in civilized communities but in majority cases only small portion of population change their behaviors by internal motivation. Majority of people need some reward or punishment in order to follow rules. As per reports of KSA crime branch because of strict rule on drugs, numbers of people who use drug in KSA are lowest in the world.
Although there are compelling arguments on both sides of the case, but looking closely one can conclude that there are significant effects of law on human behavior. So, I strongly agree with the statement that law change human behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'academic research'.
Suggestion: academic research
...I was a university student, I performed an academic research on the crime rate in Lahore city, which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97752808989 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53608114156 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1863991498 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400918619907 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15996741323 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119453972553 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26972072402 0.151781067708 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10522998481 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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