some people believe laws change human behavior. do you agree it.

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some people believe laws change human behavior. do you agree it.

The importance of laws which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of the laws of any nation has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, i will discuss the both positive and negative impact of this trend in upcoming paragraphs.

These are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stem from the fact that the laws can change the human behavior because the nation have strong law about crime and rape so that the people can change their mind about these faults. For instance, if our

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s trend in recent years. In my opinion, i will discuss the both positive and nega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 592.0 1207.87684729 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 242.827586207 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.92707691288 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4474476501 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 139.433497537 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691666666667 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 379.143842365 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9752344444 50.4703680194 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158775971615 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608119694518 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694431905355 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122506667405 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059227854436 0.0609392437508 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 55.0591133005 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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