Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.
The importance of people prefer to listen to music while study , Whch was alaways debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of studying has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on these years . it can be agreed some people like listen to music. this essay will eloborate cocentrate on study and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous studying are the most important of our life but the most conspicous one stems from the fact that study As an illustration this is a good habit for student. As a result student are future of our country
Nevertheless there remain some drawbacks whichcan certainly overwhelem the potential influence of while studying, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that student studying and listen the music they not concentrate on study . for instance music are not allow to student while they studying. because of that this is not a good habit
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of studying is prominent and the way student do not concentrate on study because he listen the music make sentence about topic should be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67358899886 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3874064953 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286178812872 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138384590555 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925604472795 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168504078795 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969984642715 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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