Some people say law can change human behaviour. Do you agree?
The role of laws in bringing a positive change in people’s behaviour is widely debated, with many people claiming that human behaviour is rarely affect by enforcing stringent rule-setting. However, I do not entirely accept this and will explain why in this essay.
There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous argument lies in the fact that rigorous rules can endanger fear among miscreants, who mostly commit crimes because of the leeway they enjoy in breaking the law. Not only these stringent rules make people aware that their illegal or unlawful activities will result in severe punishment such as financial penalty, jail term or even death sentence, but the likelihood that they will indulge in criminal activities is also bound to decline. Needless to say, all these benefits stand people in good stead, as far as making them disciplined is concerned.
Another argument in favour of rule-setting can be seen in childhood, when a child learns to do things following a proper order set either by their parents or by their teachers. Besides, by sticking to these rules and regulations, children not only learn essential attributes like discipline and punctuality, but also excel in academic studies. Hence, it is apparent why many believe that human behaviour is immensely shaped by law and order.
In view of the arguments outlined above, once can conclude that the benefits of strict rules in shaping human behaviour is instrumental indeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affected
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17355371901 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7579789062 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632231404959 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1675156332 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240613512835 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851346952044 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078439235863 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147361239633 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625034096284 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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