Some people say the robots will work as a teacher in the school in the future. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people to believe that robots are working as a teacher in place of humans. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this, and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that robots will work as teachers in school in the future, it can increase the inflation rate in the future, but through this, robots can do the same job for a long time without any rest, and we can enhance the numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by some people say the robots will work as a teacher in the school. It also enhances the productivity and standard of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities and dedication. Hence, It is apparent why many are in favor of robots will work as teachers in school in the future.
To conclude that, the benefits of robots will work as teachers in school in the future are indeed too great to ignore.
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The most preponderant one is…
The most preponderant one is that robots will work as teachers in school in the future, it can increase the inflation rate in the future, but through this, robots can do the same job for a long time without any rest, and we can enhance the numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by some people say the robots will work as a teacher in the school. It also enhances the productivity and standard of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Suggestion:
...se the inflation rate in the future, but through this, robots can do the same job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56727272727 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58961690265 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5395254651 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350633159558 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132536404383 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162187692752 0.071462118173 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221214392963 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889042868878 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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