Some say mothers are better parents than fathers What is your opinion

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Some say mothers are better parents than fathers. What is your opinion.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people to believe that mothers are more caring and better parents than father. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this, and explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that mother's are better parents than father's but I believe that father and mother both take important place in every life. Both play their own role and both are loving style are different. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by topic mothers are better parents than fathers. Parents can enhance the standard of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes are dedication and responsibilities. Hence, It is apparent why many are in favor of mothers are better parents than fathers.
To conclude that, the benefits of mothers are better parents than fathers are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...life. Both play their own role and both are loving style are different. Thanks to the wide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80912863071 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56757638195 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4453945703 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1538461538 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306491411931 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113528237421 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126603048389 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204915420025 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835419698812 0.0609392437508 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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