Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy which opinion do you agree with ? discuss
The importance of keeping pets is good for children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that pets are not good for the children health. Moreover, many jurms and becteria grow in the pets hairs. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that Needless to say, all these merits stand keeping pets is good for children in a good stead .
Elaborate my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that in the ill stage very danger to touch the pets. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of keeping pets is good for children are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53285501989 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3965857747 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240981088213 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903649136491 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865963547053 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140751602124 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569274976069 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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