Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend that human behavior be changed by law as per people ideation around the world, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. Some people believe that this law are changing the behavior of humans, while others disagree. In this essay, I will elaborate positive aspects of how this thinking of law changes human behavior.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons of this soaring concern. Firstly law has a great impact over the people, as such law consummately describes the rights towards any strict action towards negative happenings. For example in most of the countries, the violence uphill act will result to the severe punitive, where criminal are highly punished and raise to death. Apparently, this act of law has a positive impact on towards people's so as to avert in repercussion.
To embark this, Moreover, another pivotal facet of law is not only just on the criminal act but law also has strict roles overs in education wise. For instance in country like china and japan most of the students who are applying for certain masters courses in an apropos university will not be eligible to get as such because of low-grade scores. Apparently students who are serious in hard studies will be given the priority and not any priorities or such relationship works , as such act comes under strict law which the chances the people gets affected.
To recapitulate, from the aforementioned arguments, one can conclude that despite having the impact of laws, the upsides shall be accentuated that people should be motivated about such laws which are positive for having a good nation and are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95890410959 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64131631061 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4933715493 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221333821863 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958022048374 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942854458879 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133597699893 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117149076224 0.0609392437508 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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