Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
The crime rate in current society has been upsurged drastically which is unbalancing society culture. This significant imbalance in human society can be
controlled by powerful low which is a natural way to commence the change in human behaviour and pay a vital role for mankind society. This essay will elaborate
the positive and negative impact of low on human behaviour with a supported example.
First and foremost, to curb the crime in society a significant low and heavy fine has to be imposed by political or low governed authorised on criminal which would result in a fear in criminal. This fear will combat his mind for any next attempt. For example, A heavy fine has to be charged on vehicle owner after breaking traffic rules.
This will be pathbreaking for a traffic violation and will set a clear example for other riders. This change in low with a heavy fine or short term prison would improve the human behaviour.
On the flip side, Sometimes imposing strict low makes criminal animal kind of behaviour due to the power of resistance. For example, life term ban makes murderer animal kind of
the mindset which is detrimental to the society.
Overall, the positive impact of Low on human behaviour outweigh the negative impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as to, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95734597156 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6151347849 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516587677725 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0229273135 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577032134904 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259805815486 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376527030626 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329858895519 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276273172471 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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