Some people think that laws change human behavior, do you agree or disagree.
The topic of law changes has become the matter of discussion for quit some years now. Although, some quarters of society are engaged in discussing this vital topic, But there has been not substantial result. Likewise, many people believe that law changes the human behavior, I partially agree with this statement and discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, law plays an important role in our life and it helps us to maintain the peaceful environment, because when any person is involved in any kind of crime, he think many times about punishments, that is given after that crime, so proper law also decrease the crime rate. Moreover, without proper laws, the people who are under the poverty line, they have to face many problems related to unemployment, due to which they cannot enjoy in their life and their offspring cannot attain education and corrupt people will do cruelty with them and they will not get justice.
On the other hand, some people believe that laws are also create disturbance in common people, likewise, sometime people have to face many problems due to the laws, like traffic rules also disturb them during driving and when they are engaged in urgent works. Besides this, some laymen are also disturbed by corrupt officers, who do not follow the rules and who obey the richest people like political leaders.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion rules are beneficial for all people, government should make strict laws against the people who do not follow the rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9320754717 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33579723782 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.06552994 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264492044793 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10881492242 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794952194779 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150064573909 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708585183456 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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