The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Man is a social animal, who is developed day by day because technology has changed the world drastically. thus world is becoming smaller place due to globalization, while many people think that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. But I am disagree with this statement and discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, man become update due to globalization, because he can know about news of all over the world. Secondly, people can communicate with others from anywhere with help of mobiles. Moreover, man is very busy in his life, due to which he does not get proper of relaxation, but now he can enjoy watching the television and play in the video games.
Apart from this, People able to know about languages and cultures of other countries, so that it is a source of knowledge. Furthermore, Any person can buy any product online on the internet, so that it save their time. Besides this, student can study on the internet, which save their money and time. After that, people can show their talent on the internet, who cannot afford the money.
In conclusion, it can be said that globalization is very beneficial for all people and they can do many works easily with help of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...logy has changed the world drastically. thus world is becoming smaller place due to ...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...logy has changed the world drastically. thus world is becoming smaller place due to ...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...vitably disappear as a result. But I am disagree with this statement and discuss in upco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79807692308 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70231656045 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7929178208 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192825053874 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786206348341 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122308671302 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125858127642 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123908523825 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.5 Out of 90
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