'Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women,'
To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your ow n experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women. While it is possible to claim that women continue to develop herself more and more to can compete in the work market. My view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analyzing the both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why some types of employment do not appropriate for women. One of them there are some types of employment need muscles and strong body and women do not have it. It can also be argued that there are some types of employment need long hours per day and this will affects the important role of women in caring the their children. It should also be taken into account that when women participate in every employment types, it decrease the chances of men to get a job and men have many spends more than women.
Those who argue that all employment types are suitable form women have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly they argue that it makes woman an independent person and do not need anything from others. Then, there are concerns about women like men and they can do any type of work.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal view is that women have a special ability which can not do all the types of work. I strongly recommend that women occupy the indoor jobs more than the outdoor jobs which need less effort and hours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...t need long hours per day and this will affects the important role of women in caring t...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...s the important role of women in caring the their children. It should also be taken into ...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...rticipate in every employment types, it decrease the chances of men to get a job and men...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52112676056 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25556685314 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485915492958 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9560749984 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32899006188 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130664728292 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973066964365 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210545848 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897680271509 0.0609392437508 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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