soprts events
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on hosting sports events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the hosting countries can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exist on either side, I agree with that idea because this will encourage these countries economy.
there are a number of reasons in favor in my stance to commence with, hosting sports events can be associated with many benefits to the hosting countries, as this opens the door for more tourists and visitors to visit these places and refresh the countries financial planes. there was a study conducted in The Guardians shows that in the last ten years countries which host The World Cup has earned a lot of money during these periods which assessed their planes. therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that itis important.
In addition, w can see that there are many advantages such as exchanging culture issues which can help people to understand different cultures. this a good method to deal with other countries. This exemplifies that hosting sports festival is crucial.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided above and hence my opinion is that it is good for countries to host sporting events.
- distance learning 55
- business 77
- experiential learning 77
- soprts events 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15859030837 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85093850104 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7397651589 50.4703680194 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.111111111 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0459724257601 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154938789971 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289873438618 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0253569998145 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255270220638 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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