A successful person is influenced by the place where he/she lived in childhood or the place they born? What do you think? Give a person as an example to convince your idea and the accompaniment of the person was or wasn’t influenced by the place where he was born.
These days, it has become a growing trend to see a successful person is influenced by the place where he /she lived in childhood or the palace they born. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that successful person usually have very good conditions when they were children. Not only did they were touch in good education, but they did also grow up in the good society environment. Needless to say, all the upsides stand with them in the good stead when it comes to rising up in the best conditions.
Another pivotal aspect of is that by having a suitable environment, people can avoid bad guys. The primary one stems from the fact that children trend to learn from bad people if they are often contact with them. Last but not least, good family can make good effects on children. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of a successful person is influenced by the place where he /she lived in childhood or the palace they were born.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the good place where someone lived in childhood or the place they born are too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... former outdo the latter. There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ne lived in childhood or the place they born are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47234042553 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.326613013 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7596231993 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292576535081 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115658396247 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166491930807 0.071462118173 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202737518742 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857861045571 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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