Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not?
Nowadays, sports stars and film stars inspire younger people, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people agree that they play a vital role in building lives of younger ones, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that they damage our future talent. But in my opinion, these celebrities are true mentors in their lives. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why sports stars and film stars are idols to younger ones. The most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they are an epitome of dedication, perseverance and motivates them. As an illustration, many adolescents imitate these celebrities and learn life skills like never give up attitude. Moreover, their real-life experiences add teachings to their lives. Thus, there is no doubt that sports stars and film star’s life are an inspiration to youngsters.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of these celebrities and the most alarming one roots from the fact that these celebrities sometimes engage in unacceptable and anti-social activities which youngsters imitate. For instance, many sports stars resort to drugs to boost their performance and many adolescents follow them thus, losing focus and concentration from their career. Hence, it shows that emulating sports stars and film stars have a negative impact on youngsters.
In the light of above discussion, it is concluded that the impact of sports stars and film stars is positive on our future generation and helps them in building their career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30943396226 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79847387591 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9912351801 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283966850194 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116044473625 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130904134918 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190460283357 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334610568309 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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