Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are youngsters role model. Do you support it or not?
Youngsters consider successful people from sports and films as their role model. Many people support the idea of considering stars as an inspiration while some think that stars are not inspirational worthy. In this essay I will explain why it is absolutely fine to accept sports or film stars as role models.
To consider an accomplished person as a role model from the fields of sports or films should be appreciated. Youth get attracted to the attention these stars enjoy which makes them aspire similar things their lives too. These celebrities work very hard to give the best in their respective fields. An athlete has to train for months if not for years to reach the goal. The tough journey of these people to get the star status is definitely inspirational.
Why should anyone oppose the thought of setting a sports star or a film star as role model? Irrespective of the field of work, everyone puts in their best effort to excel. An actor trains in various martial arts to deliver the best shot. Their dedication and sincerity in their work makes them so admirable.
Sports stars and gorgeous film stars with successful careers are highly admired by many youngsters. I completely support youngsters taking a sports star or a film star as an inspiration as it will make them to yearn for similar success.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88495575221 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62495315063 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8077938695 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8571428571 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 7.25397266985 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433933205958 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160290796714 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151423605081 0.071462118173 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306376077139 0.151781067708 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137529990658 0.0609392437508 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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