Successful sports stars and glamour film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? Agree/ disagree
Today, youngsters as their role models follow celebrities such as sport and movie stars. Some people believe that following such famous personalities is good for youngsters while others oppose this idea. This essay will discuss both the positive and negative effects of following celebrities as role models by the youngsters.
To begin with, celebrities impart a very beneficial effect on the life of youngsters. Firstly, they can be the source of inspiration for young generation because their hard and struggling lives inspire them to achieve their goals with determination. Struggle and hard work, for example, of famous sport star Milkha Singh inspired a large number of youngsters to achieve success in life. Furthermore, social works carried out by celebrities such as to run a non-government organisation to help the needy and poor people inspire them to be a good human being, which not only benefited them but also the society.
On the other hand, there are also some negative effects on young generation when they follow sports and film stars. When youngsters try to imitate the lavish lifestyle of celebrities chances of them being criminals increase. Many youngsters, for instance, indulged in illegal activities in order to follow the lifestyle of famous Indian film star Sanjay Dutt. Moreover, consumption of alcohol and late night parties by celebrities give rise to malpractices by young generation.
To conclude, celebrities affected the life of young generation in both ways. In my opinion, considering successful celebrities as role models is the right choice for youngsters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...famous sport star Milkha Singh inspired a large number of youngsters to achieve success in life. ...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...when they follow sports and film stars. When youngsters try to imitate the lavish li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42629482072 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92709138944 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.666092877 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201808790491 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795138325553 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800056166803 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13045170601 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218985058215 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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