Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of invention. And discuss recent invention that you think is good or bad to society.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the technological advancements in the world which has reshaped our society. While it is possible to claim that the new inventions have badly impacted our lives, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
First of all, there are several reasons why new innovations in this era are beneficial and blessings for us. The most preponderant reason is that our life has become very much easier and convenient with the new inventions. In the past, people used to wash clothes manually which is time-consuming and laborious also but washing machines solved this issue. Moreover, it can also be argued that the computers and mobile phones have simplified the business which improved not only the communication but productivity has also increased.
Second of all, smartphones are one of the biggest new inventions which has changed the way of our lives. A simple smartphone has replaced many other big gadgets like camera, alarm clock, calendar, watch, walkmans and many more. Furthermore, it should also be taken into account that before the advent of smartphone our lives were quite miserable because people had to carry an equipment for each and every item which is now available in the smartphones. Therefore, it is apparent that the recent inventions, especially smartphones have a far-reaching positive impact on our society.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that we are so blessed because we are born in this era which is full of inventions and high tech. However, it totally depends on us how we utilise the technology in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'equipment'.
Suggestion: equipment
...e miserable because people had to carry an equipment for each and every item which is now av...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8662058345 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2958744169 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124167669485 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433108790202 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461538887947 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783162052366 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352166736149 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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