Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can le

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Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?

Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading

Nowadays the number of people, who watches soccer games, has increased significantly. Some people believe that these sports games teach people some unique skills, such as how to keep fit and how to build a good character, while others argue that these matches are accompanied by some bad behaviour from players, such as fightings and violence. This essay will discuss the reason why team sports have a great benefit on the society regardless some violence which could occur rarely.

Team sports have a great advantage, they learn people how to become social, whereby they contribute to building social character. Playing team sports, such as soccer, creates social inspiration between players. For example, watching Jordan league contributes greatly to learning people the cooperation norm. Therefore, it is obvious the great benefits from participating in sports teams.

On the other hand, some people believe that violent actions could happen in matches. People could be injured or killed during these games due to some wrong behaviours. But these people are unaware of the fact that these actions are very rare, and there are strict rules to reduce them. Therefore, team sports games provide a great benefit to the societies regardless some rare actions.

In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why playing sports games has a great advantage. In my opinion, I believe that playing team sports is very good for the individual and for the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...orts have a great advantage, they learn people how to become social, whereby they cont...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... league contributes greatly to learning people the cooperation norm. Therefore, it is ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26495726496 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50069754313 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.843959679 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235060026897 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868533488088 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590292938621 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152104260781 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575479781763 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 69.0 Out of 90
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